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The smell of smoke reminds me
Of her
Oh man, I bet I sound so absurd.
The empty pack of cigarettes on the floor,
need I say anymore?

I said goodbye, knew I'd miss her
I hesitated, but then I kissed her
Is that how, is that how you wanted this to be
Without me
Without me

We made love, in my bed
And I wish I could still believe
All those things we said
I have burning, feelings for you
I've never sung words so true

I said goodbye, knew I'd miss her
I hesitated, but then I kissed her
Is that how, is that how you wanted this to be
Without me
Without me

I guess I tried
A little to hard
to keep you here
I guess I cried
and now I'm just scarred
why does it have to be like this

I said goodbye, knew I'd miss her
I hesitated, but then I kissed her
Is that how, is that how you wanted this to be
Without me
Without me
©2006-2009 ~AceOfHearts
:iconaceofhearts:

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:iconladytwiglet:
:cuddle:

really good....flows very well and theres tons of emotion too...excellent hun! :heart:

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last night? you should have seen me, i was totally car parked!

:whisper: psssst....want some awesome stock??
:iconfatchibineko:
I really like this one! Nice work! :+fav:

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"Sit your ass down and drink your damn tea!!"
--Cid, FFVII

"Go ahead, indulge in your freakish masturbation! It's all you're good at!"
--At chan, Paprika
:iconvanilla-chan:
i can honestly say this is the most beautiful thing you've ever written

i love it benneh =]
:iconfiendbethismouse:
This is fantastic.

The chorus? really struck home.

I said goodbye, knew I'd miss her
I hesitated, but then I kissed her
Is that how, is that how you wanted this to be
Without me
Without me


Amazing work.

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Somebody tall, go turn on the sun
:iconaceofhearts:
omg it means so much that you've read this, let alone commented it and praised it so much. :blushes: thanks. =/

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconaceofhearts:
Anybody'd think you were my groupie. =P

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconaceofhearts:
Thanks, it's really appreciated, I was a bit hesitant putting it up.

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconfatchibineko:
not a problem! you're a very good writer, so you have no need to feel ashamed! ^^

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"Sit your ass down and drink your damn tea!!"
--Cid, FFVII

"Go ahead, indulge in your freakish masturbation! It's all you're good at!"
--At chan, Paprika
:iconfiendbethismouse:
Laughing

Well... everyone needs a groupie right? d:

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Somebody tall, go turn on the sun

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