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The 'I love you's are getting tired
But sorry darling, that's just how I'm wired
I'm a ticking self-destruct bomb
Know where I'm coming from?

Best friends, until the end
Best friends, until the end
But still, I'm yet to comprehend
Why you put up with me
Can't you see, that
I'm dying for you.

The conversations we have nowadays are depressed
You're sitting, perfectly dressed
At the other end of a telephone line
You used to be mine

Getting over people
Was never a forte of mine
All wounds heal with time
But time's a neccesity I never had
Nowadays I'm about as sensitive as a stone

Best friends, until the end
Best friends, until the end
But still, I'm yet to comprehend
Why you put up with me
Can't you see, that
I'm dying for you.

Some would call me pathetic
I'm just trying to be depressively poetic
I'm sorry I'm such a shit friend
You used to be able to depend, on me
Now I'm torn in two
©2006-2009 ~AceOfHearts
:iconaceofhearts:

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:iconfatgirlstock:
I like this...it's a feeling I understand, and the poem has great phrasing.
:icongeniusloci:
Feeling... Sorry flr it.

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I'm addiction. How do you want me?
:iconiheartpirates:
this works really well with the rhyme, i like it alot, but im sad youre sad *hugs*

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my photography =piratephotography
my poetry *iheartpirates
my stock ~closemyeyes-stock
:iconaceofhearts:
:?

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconaceofhearts:
thanks, it means alot :)

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconaceofhearts:
Glad someone can empathise :)

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconfatgirlstock:
I bet lots of people can.
:iconaceofhearts:
Wish they'd speak up ;P

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Enjoy life, there's plenty of time to be dead
:iconaerionne:
Well...beautiful as always. What's life with out sacrifice. I wish you could be alright though. Why couldn't i finad those words when I was in the exact same position ?
:/

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